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~Amber's Poem Book~

Post by Amber on Sun Nov 15, 2009 3:56 pm

I've been very bord lately, so i've taken to writing poetry. I'm not that good but i wanted to just get some input. Please rate my peoms on a 0-10 scale :-)
(Just to make sure you rate them honestly, you get 1 rep if you rate :-)

Why Can't You see
Why Can't you see
We were completly ment to be
If ever you were to leave me so
I'm go to the end of the world- to and fro
Maybe if you'd just belive
you could see what I see


More coming soon- i have a ton more, but i don't feel like typing them now
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Post by Eduardo on Wed Nov 18, 2009 3:52 pm

Your really good at poetry! I rate it 10/10!

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Post by norih on Thu Nov 19, 2009 1:34 pm

10/10 too!

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Post by Eduardo on Thu Nov 19, 2009 4:30 pm

You might want to work on making a lot of long poems!

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Post by norih on Fri Nov 20, 2009 12:06 pm

make more! I can't wait!

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Post by Eduardo on Fri Nov 20, 2009 6:33 pm

Hopefully they're better!

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Post by norih on Sat Nov 21, 2009 12:11 pm

Why? I think that it would be hard to make a better poem than this one!

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Post by Eduardo on Sat Nov 21, 2009 11:58 pm

If it's better, than it would be great!

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Post by norih on Sun Nov 22, 2009 9:50 am

It will be hard to beat this one! I LOVE it!

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Post by Linky on Mon Nov 23, 2009 3:21 pm

Nice poem, 10/10!

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Post by norih on Tue Nov 24, 2009 5:30 pm

I think so too!

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Post by Eduardo on Wed Nov 25, 2009 10:30 pm

It's still a 10/10!

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Post by norih on Thu Nov 26, 2009 2:17 pm

Of course!

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Post by deathxbot on Thu Nov 26, 2009 9:32 pm

I like the poem good job Amber make more soon!

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