~Amber's Poem Book~
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~Amber's Poem Book~
I've been very bord lately, so i've taken to writing poetry. I'm not that good but i wanted to just get some input. Please rate my peoms on a 0-10 scale :-)
(Just to make sure you rate them honestly, you get 1 rep if you rate :-)
Why Can't You see
Why Can't you see
We were completly ment to be
If ever you were to leave me so
I'm go to the end of the world- to and fro
Maybe if you'd just belive
you could see what I see
More coming soon- i have a ton more, but i don't feel like typing them now
(Just to make sure you rate them honestly, you get 1 rep if you rate :-)
Why Can't You see
Why Can't you see
We were completly ment to be
If ever you were to leave me so
I'm go to the end of the world- to and fro
Maybe if you'd just belive
you could see what I see
More coming soon- i have a ton more, but i don't feel like typing them now
Re: ~Amber's Poem Book~
Your really good at poetry! I rate it 10/10!
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Re: ~Amber's Poem Book~
10/10 too!
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Re: ~Amber's Poem Book~
You might want to work on making a lot of long poems!
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Re: ~Amber's Poem Book~
make more! I can't wait!
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Re: ~Amber's Poem Book~
Hopefully they're better!
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Re: ~Amber's Poem Book~
Why? I think that it would be hard to make a better poem than this one!
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Re: ~Amber's Poem Book~
If it's better, than it would be great!
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Re: ~Amber's Poem Book~
It will be hard to beat this one! I LOVE it!
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Re: ~Amber's Poem Book~
Nice poem, 10/10!
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Re: ~Amber's Poem Book~
I think so too!
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Re: ~Amber's Poem Book~
It's still a 10/10!
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Re: ~Amber's Poem Book~
Of course!
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Re: ~Amber's Poem Book~
I like the poem good job Amber make more soon!
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